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題目：Somebelieve that we should keep a distance from the people we care about, because it is necessary for people to understand the importance of each other. Others think being away from people we care about can damage our relationship with them and we should spend more time with them. Which do you prefer?

No man has all the answers, and no man is an island. Inour life, weencountermany different people, some of whom become ourbeloved families and friends.Considering this, how to maintaina companionable relationwith the ones we care about needs careful consideration. We may hear the quote –“distance makes the heart grow fonder”.If you are away from someone, you will get a chance to miss them. On the other hand, the saying-out of sight is out of mind-also applies to many situations. If you are not in constant contact with someone, after a while, things will slowly start to fade. As for me, I am strongly convinced that we should spend more time with ones we care about.

First, staying with people we care about, weblend into each other’s life.【中心句】One of the prerequisites to maintain a relationship is never lack of things to talk about.How can two people living away about kilometers have tons of words to share? The real situation is that the feeling of strangeness will ensue because they do not share the same life experiences.【設問句，自問自答】Onlybyaccompanyingeach other more often can opportunities of getting closer be generated.【倒裝句強調】Taking my personal experience as an example, just like other white-collar workers who are busy with thefast-paced urban life,I usually go back to my hometown and stay with my parents twice a year, about 10 days in total. Because of sudden outbreak of epidemic COVID 19, I cannot go back to Wuhan,telecommutingat my hometown. During the four months with my parents, I have found that my father’s favorite fruit is banana rather than apples, which I mistakenly thought of before. Also, my mom is an enthusiastic fan of costume drama. Being curious, I watched the drama with her, which is not soboring and bleakas I consider it before.With the wisdom of hindsight, I should haveleft more time to accompany my parents.【狀語從句，回顧過往】

Opponents of staying with families and friends may argue that dreaded space issue cannot be tackled. Most relationships have their big row with respect to their own space.【讓步】This usually happens when we are always together, resulting in disputes or even conflicts in the end.【非謂語】Imagining that how many times have you argued with your Mom about chores such as not putting your clothes on the sofa?【設問句引起共鳴】They have ignored the fact, though, that the quarrel is a way, let’s be honest,toknow each other better.【轉折】The worst part for a relationship is that people never have something to argue with. Due in large part to this, a long-distance relationjeopardizes our relationshipmore often. Anyone who has seen “the Big Bang Theory” would be impressed by Sheldon and Leonard, the close roommates.Despite having divergences in many realms including living habit and attitudes towards love, they just get back to their sincere friendship at the end of every episode.【讓步狀語從句】Therefore, it is difficult to avoidbecomingat odds withour friends or families.【雙重否定表肯定】The essence to maintain a closer bond is to spend more time with ones we care about.【不定式前后平行】

As is stated above, I honestly believe that spending more time with people we care about helps us understand them more and deepen the relationship.

寫作思路：

此題題干較長，我們先仔細讀題，對于keep a distance，題目中提出了兩種相反的觀點，一方說讓我們了解彼此的重要性，反方認為這樣會破壞關系。為了確認我們的觀點，我們可以采取倒三角形的方法倒推。也就是，結合我們的個人經歷先梳理細節，再反推出我們的觀點。比如可以想想這個春節假期和家人待在一起的經歷，又或者去外地上大學而會離開父母一段時間，根據個人不同的感受和想法，可以梳理出自己的思路，進而確定論點。

文章結構：

議論文的標準結構，總分總。在主體段分別為一個立論段和一個駁論段。立論段結合自身經歷論證和家人，朋友多花時間待在一起才會融入彼此的生活。駁論段先讓步說待在一起的問題，轉折，承上論證。

主題相關語料：

遇到某人(生活)encounter sb

摯愛的家人和朋友(描述人)beloved families and friends

良好的關系(描述關系)a companionable relation

距離產生美(引語)“Distance makes the heart grow fonder.”

眼不見心不念(引語)out of sight is out of min

融入(描述關系)blend into someone’s life

陪伴某人(描述關系)accompany sb

忙碌的城市生活(描述日常)fast-paced urban life

在家遠程辦公(描述工作)telecommute

無趣單調(形容詞)boring and bleak

傷害感情(描述關系)jeopardize relationship

和。。。不合(描述關系)become at odds with sb

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